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Roll by rongs1234

Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be. dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15… Also, the mouth sho...

Flower Girl by rongs1234

Given the size of the eyes, they are too close. A good rule of thumb is to be able to fit a 3rd imaginary eye between the other 2 eyes....

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Roll by rongs1234
Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be.

dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15…

Also, the mouth should be between the eyes.

Anatomy issues apart, I like the outfit idea, and colors. I recognized it as Roll even thou she has a diff "age". I'm not a fan of the "popeye" arms but I guess you call it a homage to Megaman style.

I rated everything 2.5 stars because I don't like the star system and writing this made reach the 100 words minimum. :)

Wait, need a iittle more....

blah blah blah.

........Ok, now I'm done.

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JoPereira
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I should be updating more, but house chores + updating 5 times a week + commissions just leech all energy I have.

I need to organize myself better so this won't happOMGSKYRIMLAUNCHEDMUSTPLAY!

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JellyfishGreen Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015
I just tried looking for your Game of Thrones comics on StudioRumble.com, but no luck... Would you consider reposting them here?
Enjoying Engie-tan art! Thanks!
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Atlessa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
You mentioned on your last comic that you're looking for a new game, 'maybe something more Indie'?

I might have something for you: cross-code.com
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Sonicvt Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
I need to tell you somthng
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Sonicvt Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Can i put you in my comic someday
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Merc-King Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
Hey Jo Happy Birthday, thanks you for NerfNow and the fanservices. Sorry I can only give you a Llama. 

Why cake need points anyway?
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krisslanza Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy birthday!
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DrewB1442 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday.
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Caraig Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy birthday!
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jamesgunner123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
...the happiest of birthdays to you awesome artist...hope you're having a totally rad time...=3
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jherqin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
happy birthday!
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