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Roll by rongs1234

Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be. dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15… Also, the mouth sho...

Flower Girl by rongs1234

Given the size of the eyes, they are too close. A good rule of thumb is to be able to fit a 3rd imaginary eye between the other 2 eyes....

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Roll by rongs1234
Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be.

dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15…

Also, the mouth should be between the eyes.

Anatomy issues apart, I like the outfit idea, and colors. I recognized it as Roll even thou she has a diff "age". I'm not a fan of the "popeye" arms but I guess you call it a homage to Megaman style.

I rated everything 2.5 stars because I don't like the star system and writing this made reach the 100 words minimum. :)

Wait, need a iittle more....

blah blah blah.

........Ok, now I'm done.

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A very happy birthday to you^^
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