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Roll by rongs1234

Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be. dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15… Also, the mouth sho...

Flower Girl by rongs1234

Given the size of the eyes, they are too close. A good rule of thumb is to be able to fit a 3rd imaginary eye between the other 2 eyes....

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Roll by rongs1234
Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be.

dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15…

Also, the mouth should be between the eyes.

Anatomy issues apart, I like the outfit idea, and colors. I recognized it as Roll even thou she has a diff "age". I'm not a fan of the "popeye" arms but I guess you call it a homage to Megaman style.

I rated everything 2.5 stars because I don't like the star system and writing this made reach the 100 words minimum. :)

Wait, need a iittle more....

blah blah blah.

........Ok, now I'm done.

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JoPereira
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I should be updating more, but house chores + updating 5 times a week + commissions just leech all energy I have.

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doomedfool Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
happy birthday jo
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hawk222 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Artist
Happy birthday!
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g8ut Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday!
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IronBloodAika Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday!
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TigerDude51087 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday!

:party: :cake:
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Hexidextrous Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday!

I hope that your comic is going well too!
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ZeroConfidence Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
:iconpartycannonplz: Happy Birthday! Ha ha! =D :iconcakeplz:
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SecretBetweenTheWar Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015   Artist
happy birthday
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Numbsoul Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy b-day, pal!! have a nive day!!!fella's Gobbler (Party) fella Gift (Party) Birthday cake  icon Misc Emoji-04 (Happy Birthday) [V1] 
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DarkEros Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015
Happy Birthday!:party::cake::party:
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