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Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be.…

Also, the mouth should be between the eyes.

Anatomy issues apart, I like the outfit idea, and colors. I recognized it as Roll even thou she has a diff "age". I'm not a fan of the "popeye" arms but I guess you call it a homage to Megaman style.

I rated everything 2.5 stars because I don't like the star system and writing this made reach the 100 words minimum. :)

Wait, need a iittle more....

blah blah blah.

........Ok, now I'm done.
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Sonicvt Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
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rongs1234 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 22, 2014
thanks for the incite

sorry to say but that link doesn't work so I cant see what you did.

I think i gave her sort of skinny Popeye arms because I felt they looked more interesting then if they where just tubes and I didn't want do give her the chunky arms that are common to most of the MM styles.

I think i have a habbit of drawing people in away that might not be anatomically correct, but I find visually pleasing, but I do want to get better at drawing the human form
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