Her neck is too far back. I did some redline of where her spine and neck should be.
Also, the mouth should be between the eyes.
Anatomy issues apart, I like the outfit idea, and colors. I recognized it as Roll even thou she has a diff "age". I'm not a fan of the "popeye" arms but I guess you call it a homage to Megaman style.
I rated everything 2.5 stars because I don't like the star system and writing this made reach the 100 words minimum.
Wait, need a iittle more....
blah blah blah.
........Ok, now I'm done.
Is this person inactive?
thanks for the incite
sorry to say but that link doesn't work so I cant see what you did.
I think i gave her sort of skinny Popeye arms because I felt they looked more interesting then if they where just tubes and I didn't want do give her the chunky arms that are common to most of the MM styles.
I think i have a habbit of drawing people in away that might not be anatomically correct, but I find visually pleasing, but I do want to get better at drawing the human form